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[DPulse - We Like Crocodiles]

We Like Crocodiles

Yes We Do ;)

DigitalPulse responds:

We all do!

Thanks for the review,

Digital Pulse

[prodogy pigeons intro music]

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Well its nice, but sure doesnt belong in Dance, more like the DnB genre

dazj1 responds:

thanks, didn't really know what to put it in

[~ Bounce Up ~]

Nice!!

I liked the melodies, i just wish they were a little longer but great job :) 5/5 10/10

Catstuffer responds:

Hey, thanks man, glad you like it!

Thanks for reviewing! :D

[[KKK99] step off motherfucker]

OMG

this is horrible. like nal1200 said, you cuss way too much, it doesnt make sense. this is just retarted. i have never said this before, "i hope you die i a fire" bassicaly i gave you a zero. i would have put 0 for the review but i accidentaly hit a star, so the lowest i can go is 1.. darn

karlkoolkid1999b responds:

i hope you die i a fire

TwICE

[Sounds Like Basshunter]

Professional Party People

Nice, but i didnt like in the beginning how the melody cut, from the intro, and re started. i think that you should give the intro a plucky feel, like in the original. the clap should come in later. but it DEFIANTLY needs a kick throughout the whole song. then you should get the trancy sounds with the main melody to play. make the bassline come in earlier, it adds sooo much to the song. add in a high hat, that would help the song too. the song was a little repetative too. also try putting in some type of ending, it just cut off.

tomashcu responds:

yeah i can do all of that ill pm you when done! :)

ayyayay!! i made such a better version of this song please check it out!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AOeC4F ge_oI

[- - Early SuMMer mOrninG - -]

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The sounds you chose are nice. I like the beginning when the sounds fade in, with the choir, but it took a little while, and was repetative. also after the sounds were faded in it got repetative. The percussion (it was like a rattle) was off. the cymbals were off too. but keep trying, it has the potential.

bornacar responds:

Thanks for the advices and the encouragement:)
Ill work on the drums and repetitivness

[-*Memories*-]

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in the beginning after that kick, you should move the whole song up a bit, it goes silent for a second. then the weird sounds and bells after that are just totally random, and really, destroy the song. then the kicks and all that stuff, dont really make sense either. now what is with that wierd movie audio clip, it doesnt make sense either. the plucking with the harp or whatever sounds really nice, you should expand that. the techno sounds after that, with the main melody, sould be led in better, maybe a build up, and fade it in. then the weird buzzing bass, needs to be replaced. expand the main melody more, it gets repetative. the "how bout that" vocal, once again is just too random, and with the kicks, it isnt very pleasant for the ears.

Aerodin responds:

This is hardcore. If you, Mr so called dancenation, make music, you should at least know what hardcore is. Go do some research, because all those "random" parts in the song, that is exactly why it is called hardcore. Those were hardcore elements, and if you don't like it, that's fine with me. Hardcore is a very hard and jumpy music-style, not really intended for trance softies.
Go look up some hardcore on youtube and see if you can find anything that you DO like, because you obviously need to do some research before you judge.

THanks for the comment, don't get me wrong, i'm not attacking you, ok?

[I'm on a Mission]

Um, Alright

Well, the kick seems really really distorted. The trancy parts took too long to come in, I would also have chosen a different arp, because it sometimes feels like the notes are out of tune. is it a detune arp? everything seemed a bit streched, like not enough variation. when the trancy stuff came in, it didnt feel much like trance at all. maybe add in some percussion- kicks, claps, snares, and high hats. the song felt shallow, so maybe a nice pad, synth, or choir in the background would help. then the ending wasnt very special. the song also felt a bit slow too. the high hat, with the fast beat, felt more like a hip hop song than a trance song :/ use some happy poizone arp instead of the detune one. (that i mentioned up above)

Ignyte responds:

nice observation! however i didnt use an arp at all.
The song did have a kick and hats.
I create alot of songs that sound a bit hip hoppy for my mate michael (Mc Rumbles) to do his rapping over.
But all in all i like your suggestions, ill definiately have to fiddle around with this one a bit.
Thanks heaps for the review and the vote!!!

[FirstAttemptDisc [01]]

Flash Studio?

Um, when you say flash studio, do you mean fl studio, lol

Bhaku-Socom responds:

Fixed

[Your Beauty]

Im Getting Down To This ;)

Well, its pretty good, all i would do, is change out the saw, for the bass line, to maybe a more generic bassy sound. you can find some around the net for free. i would suggest putting in a hit hat so you get that trancy feel, and then maybe at the climax, introduce a new intsrument (fade it in) and for it to be like some trancy sounding one. just mess around with what sounds sound best. then also at the climax put in a new beat, just mess around with the kicks and claps.

but if this isnt really going to be a trance song. put in maybe a cello or something for the bassline. then find some drum kits that sound more reallistic, and stay away from the trancy drum kits. (if you have FL, FPC is the best for this) and then at the climax put in a choir, with long notes. that compliment the music. i think that a choir should go in either song genre, whether you choose to make it classical/ambient, or trance. (if you change it)

but if you left it as it is, its an ok, track. hope this helps, or that you can use this in the future :)

ElectroLord99 responds:

yeah, i made this right after she told me. so i was pretty crushed, i didnt feel very creative or anything so i just slapped this all together. im sorry, ill try to remake it :)