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[Smashing Ego]

Well..

Alright, well, im going to review you, like you've been making music for years, so look out :)

ok the kick was way to soft. stay away from the drum loops, its kinda cheesy, try creating your own beats. very repetative, more variation. dont use the fl vocals, most of the time, if used plainly (no delay, or slicing) its very boring, and also cheesy. just an arp, the whole time, is also boring, you'd want to develop a melody, and put a trancy'ier sound in for the arp, or set the arp in the background, and for the bg arp, to compliment the main melody. hope this helps :)

IpCrash3r responds:

Hey, thanks for the review.

Just took your advice and pumped up the kick x100%, and it shouldn't be "as" repetitive in the final version, i moved it around a bit. I'm trying to learn how to do vocal slicing, i wanted to do an effect on the "one", but that might take a while.

Thinking about adding my own vocals as well, but im not sure how I could incorporate it into this type of song. I'm more of a classic rock guy who barely listens to techno, so i guess i'll have to do some researching.

Anyways, thanks again for the review, i'll be using yer advice.

-Crash3r

[[D106] Spirit Weaver]

Holy Fuck

This, is one of the best i have heard in a while

dreadnought106 responds:

Thanks but as I said its not very well mixed but I will sort that out in September!

[Destroyed Memories - NG Cut]

Pretty Good

I wasnt a big fan of the vocals in the beginning, but after that, it was great, but then vocals again... but after that, great :) so, i think it would be better with out vocals, but the melodys are great :) 5/5

ElectroLord99 responds:

lol the vocals were the main part XD
but i may have an instrumental version later haha

[!/Dj Arch - Silver Dawn(CVR)\!]

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Well the beginning, the vocals in the beginning (did u forget to cut it at the end?) i didnt like at all, but @:39, in my opinion, thats where ths song should have started. Oh my God! i love it after that. but around 1:30 it felt like the song went faster than the lyrics. and the little "ah-ah-ah" like skipped cd thing, went on, a little too long, but after that, was just awesome @3:00, it felt like a whole nother song, and i just hated 5:00 :( sry.

Blizzaine responds:

Lol the beginning and 5:00 are the lead into the song and the lead into the next song on the CD. Gotta have it. But on my newer songs I'm cutting those out. Like on I Live For The Rave.

This songs kinda old. I'm planning on redoing it.

Thanks for the review!

-Dj Arch

[Castlekill 2]

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I liked it, but some notes, just didnt sound right like @ 40 :/

Wooormy responds:

oooh, so you forgot the fact that its part of the build-up ? :3

hih <3

[Estalion]

!!!!!

Longer!

Ludzix responds:

Whoa.

[[LK] Paradise [WiP]]

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@:50 the percussion didnt really sound that good. other than that, its great :)

LK412 responds:

Yea, ill fix that. thanks for the review.