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HOLY CRAP

Bro! you've gotten so much better!!! Your best track eva!!! haha, thanks for the shout out bro, howcome you didnt tell me about this?!?!!?
anyway, great job bro

~DanceNation~

MmmCake responds:

thanks man! i was gonna tell you when i saw you on aim, but i havent been on too much and i totally forgot about fb xD

thanks for everything man, and happy bday! (but technically it was yesterday)

:D:D:D:D

Perfect

PERFECT I LOVE IT

:DD

Makin Babies

'Nuff Said

Randomizor responds:

How many babies!?

Over 9000!!!!????

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Sounds crazy amazing, i deffinatly wont forget this track :P

What the...

What ever happened to mixing? holy crap, ur clipping like...

FYI

FYI, Youre AWESOME
Glad you beat those zerobombers helth ;)

-DanceNation

GREAT JOB!!!

OMG those bells in the beginning with guitar are driving me crazy!! Very nice use of filters. And very nice melo.. <3 !!!!!!!!!

Endeavour responds:

hey, thanks for your Review mate =D,

These guitars, um, i think you mean the plucks ? xD,
Yea they are pretty cool.

Greets,
Endeavour and Paperman

TAKE IT DOWN. WHAT HAPPENED???

Remeber what i told you!??!?! :P
Either way, good job.... great use of filters.... cant belive u uploaded this haha, i thought it was for the record co. anyway, good job tho :) 5'd too

LK412 responds:

"Me and DJ RAV3N made the original which will be released offically (hopefully by a label) some time soon."

The label prolly wont even like this version cuz its more "child-ish" i guess.

Thanks a lot for the review :D!

Hey Buddy :)

Just lookin at your page, and noticed this! :D
Yay, there's those bells they sound nice!!
Filters @ 1:14= Sweet, the melo was awesome, nice choice for a happy remix :)
Counter melo's @ 2:52, sound really nice, I liked it.. very nice job bro :)
10/10 5/5

Champius responds:

thanks man, i'm glad you liked it!

-.-

That sidechaining was very crisp in the beginning but lost its crispyness after :30. I didnt like the detune arp @ :10. the kick was badly distorted and needs better eq. i'd suggest compressing the kick aswell. the leades needed serious mixing and mastering because you were clipping like hell @ 4:03. the overall concept and structure was good, but the progression was lacking. The bass also seemed a tad bit hollow, try adding more "MMFF" to it. The high hat sounded old and rattly.. if i were you'd i'd add some serious EQing to it, I'd put Fruity Parapmeter, and then put all the scrolly thingys up to the top, for best results. Now the main melo was exelent exept for the distortion on it. I'd suggest getting Sytrus, its bassically the best VST for dance, trance, clown music, and classical. I really like what you did here tho. The arp at the end with the reverb kick could use more.. reverb.. also, this didnt sound 1 bit like envy so eh... good creativity tho.. but you were clipping in several spots, try lowering the overall volume of the track down about .055653% that should solve it. The BPM seemed to be a tad bit slow, and would probably be better @ 140BPM, since thats the one F777, and ENV use. That being said, make sure you dont clip at that high of a BPM, and dont over use the bassline either. But that kick, could use better EQing along with reverb to make it sound depper, and less distorted. Than being said, you seemed to overuse arp leads a bit to much. try going to a more convetional lead, like B0UNC3 or ENV. But remember to EQ well, and not to clip alot, that causes distortion and makes the song sound bad. but overall it was nice, besides the hallow sounding High hat. and the structure seemed a bit lacking, good job :) Even tho it didnt totalyl sound like ENV. Try maybe making it sound happyier, by increasing the pitch, and bpm to around 140BPM, like BassHunter. That being said good track. :)

DeejayDeeZ responds:

There is no detune arp at 0:10.
The song does not last to 4:03.
There is no change at 0:30.

This review is also against newgrounds guidelines. If you write something positive about a song you can't vote 0.

I wrote 1 review, now your going insane. Please grow up.

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