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[I'm on a Mission]

Um, Alright

Well, the kick seems really really distorted. The trancy parts took too long to come in, I would also have chosen a different arp, because it sometimes feels like the notes are out of tune. is it a detune arp? everything seemed a bit streched, like not enough variation. when the trancy stuff came in, it didnt feel much like trance at all. maybe add in some percussion- kicks, claps, snares, and high hats. the song felt shallow, so maybe a nice pad, synth, or choir in the background would help. then the ending wasnt very special. the song also felt a bit slow too. the high hat, with the fast beat, felt more like a hip hop song than a trance song :/ use some happy poizone arp instead of the detune one. (that i mentioned up above)

Ignyte responds:

nice observation! however i didnt use an arp at all.
The song did have a kick and hats.
I create alot of songs that sound a bit hip hoppy for my mate michael (Mc Rumbles) to do his rapping over.
But all in all i like your suggestions, ill definiately have to fiddle around with this one a bit.
Thanks heaps for the review and the vote!!!

[FirstAttemptDisc [01]]

Flash Studio?

Um, when you say flash studio, do you mean fl studio, lol

Bhaku-Socom responds:

Fixed

[Your Beauty]

Im Getting Down To This ;)

Well, its pretty good, all i would do, is change out the saw, for the bass line, to maybe a more generic bassy sound. you can find some around the net for free. i would suggest putting in a hit hat so you get that trancy feel, and then maybe at the climax, introduce a new intsrument (fade it in) and for it to be like some trancy sounding one. just mess around with what sounds sound best. then also at the climax put in a new beat, just mess around with the kicks and claps.

but if this isnt really going to be a trance song. put in maybe a cello or something for the bassline. then find some drum kits that sound more reallistic, and stay away from the trancy drum kits. (if you have FL, FPC is the best for this) and then at the climax put in a choir, with long notes. that compliment the music. i think that a choir should go in either song genre, whether you choose to make it classical/ambient, or trance. (if you change it)

but if you left it as it is, its an ok, track. hope this helps, or that you can use this in the future :)

ElectroLord99 responds:

yeah, i made this right after she told me. so i was pretty crushed, i didnt feel very creative or anything so i just slapped this all together. im sorry, ill try to remake it :)

[You knoww]

damn

that kick is distorted as hell

[Spaxcat]

Im Getting Down To This

i liked it for the most part, but i didnt really like any of the vocals at the end :?

JackLiddle responds:

Yeah, that was the only part of the song I didn't make xP beginning to regret allowing that into the song... ohwell :(

[[DJ_ITD] - Reality?]

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I liked the dark feel, it was something. but i would have to say, that maybe it should go in the ambient genre, but i can see why you put it in the trance genre, because the leads are trancy? but i still think that it belongs in the ambient. i liked 1:30 :D
4/5

djInTheDark responds:

Dually noted, I will change that. I kinda chose that genre blindly honestly.

Thanx for the great review.

DJ InTheDark

[>>Heavenly Remix<<]

Nice!!

Nice, i liked the main lead. and the synths/choirs were a nice touch too. but, the kick didnt feel that powerful

Semaphore responds:

it is a harmonic soft style, but maybe I will fix this

thank you very much =)

[Crakle- Forever wip]

Well Actually..

I loved the beginning, sounded really trancy, but i would have liked a better build up and climax.

Crakle responds:

I know what you mean sadly i didint get that much of a build up but thanks for the review i apreciate it

[{MSX} Chaoz Tribute]

Nice!!

Sounded Veryy Good!! Great Job 5/5 10/10 faved and your now one of my favorite artists. very nice!!! i liked the drum and bass, nothing really to change (in my opinion) :D

MSXOmega responds:

Thanks! I appreciate the fave!